Wayward Souls (FFVIII)
Firstly, this is not the whole story, this is in fact a very
detailed description of a short scene from the game. The feeling I got from
reading this piece was exactly the same feeling I got all those years ago when I
first witnessed this revelation. His cleverly picked choice of words fits the
whole dramatic scene wonderfully. There is one thing to note, and that is the
writer has clearly used his words to adapt it into his own fantasy. Perhaps
even trying to disguise his hidden love for the character. Unfortunately, the real
ending had a much different meaning than this fan had portrayed. I feel he
wanted the audience to feel sympathy for something that shouldn’t.
The bet (LOST)
Really, an all around great read. The writer has captured the characters perfectly in their responses, quirky remarks and joking behaviours. After reading through this fanfic it is so easy to imagine everything happening. It's as though it was taken straight out of the original script. He managed to create a playful style between the two protagonists that we never saw in the real show. I never particularly liked Kate in the show, however, I enjoyed reading this side of her. Truly a brilliant writer.
Making a Plan
This little piece is taken from an episode that everyone
wanted to see happen differently. The story was fine however it was rather
cheesy. The writer captured both characters wonderfully, obviously spending a
great deal of time rewriting the story to fit. Even though writing in a
detailed manner, exactly going for what fans wanted to see in the show, there
was no surprise to speak of. This didn’t help the writer as it is very contrary
to the show’s style. After a strong period of building up to the end, all that
followed was anticlimax. This fanfic was written well and kept in character. I
just wish the writer had taken his own spin on an alternate ending. There was so much more that could have been said to make all the cheesiness in this fanfic more believable.
The Matrix: Reconstructed
This was only the first chapter of many to follow by this writer, yet he has managed to capture the readers with such an intriguing start. I look forward to seeing how this ends.
Rutilus Viridis
"Kate's red hair seemed to absorb the light, creating a soft halo-esque glow. Her hand touched his chest, the tingle of warmth that spread across his skin made his breath hitch. If it weren't for the tingle of pain staring up in his chest, he would've sworn he was dead and looking at a real angel"
Im not much into Terminator fanfics, but this writer has definitely captured a seemingly insignificant scene, and transformed it in to a piece of poetry. well done.
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